My biggest goal from my free draft to my formal draft is trying to incorporate a third form of media that will work efficiently in my paper and keep the reader on track. I’ve already included visual by placing pictures in my text and spacial by bolding the words “run” and “running” to place an emphasis to the reader. The other options that I have remaining are to use gestural or audio but both of these modes seem difficult to place anywhere in my essay. My plan for gestural was to try and include a basic running video at the end, but I’m not sure if that will be enough and how exactly that ties into my overarching argument. My audio idea was to include a recording of someone talking about their own story of running but again, I’m not really sure where I’m going to place that into my essay, particularly since my word count is near the maximum already. Besides these changes, I’m pretty confident with cleaning up the smaller errors made such as the grammar and punctuation. These are simply easy errors that can be changed in a short about of time. The biggest challenge for me is just trying to put that third multimodal piece and making it sound coherent. I guess to overcome this, my plan would be to try placing both forms of media in, even if they don’t make much sense. Hopefully one out of the two forms of media will make sense.